tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4708186736359200929.post6530805636482675757..comments2023-10-05T04:10:18.508-07:00Comments on One Poem One Day: Cake and CahksKibBenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08980589430870589318noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4708186736359200929.post-35749329012446582662007-02-20T22:58:00.000-08:002007-02-20T22:58:00.000-08:00Good contrast - I like how the tone changes well b...Good contrast - I like how the tone changes well between the two ideas. Is there anyway the end could keep that contrast going instead of posing a rather open question? I like the stronger feel in the second half, and it could work well to keep on.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com