You baked me a cake
Warm
And full
Rich
and Delicate
With subtle icing
And a candle on top
Then you shoved yourself down my throat
Following that cake
Maybe
Trying to take it back?
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About Me
- KibBen
- I'm interested in finding myself. In finding the way to myself. In paths, in stories, in ways and changing ways. In old ways. In history, people history, thing history. Where I've been, where I will be. Where I am. That last one is always the hardest to answer.
1 comment:
Good contrast - I like how the tone changes well between the two ideas. Is there anyway the end could keep that contrast going instead of posing a rather open question? I like the stronger feel in the second half, and it could work well to keep on.
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