Thursday, January 25, 2007

Regina Spektor's Voice Break

Like a hiccough
only melodic
and filled with beauty
                                  and the free feeling you get
                                          just before you leap
                                                from a swing
                              landing hard
      and rushing back on


luke. said...

I like it. Really do. Specially the end.

Patrick said...

Once again, I like how you used structure and line breaks to get across the motion of the poem. nice work dude!

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