The water
hot (that's the good part)
and wet (that's the important part)
drowns the leaves
and pieces of fruit
and... stuff (I'm never sure what is what)
the teabits sigh
making me wish that I was the stuff with which you make tea
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About Me
- KibBen
- I'm interested in finding myself. In finding the way to myself. In paths, in stories, in ways and changing ways. In old ways. In history, people history, thing history. Where I've been, where I will be. Where I am. That last one is always the hardest to answer.
4 comments:
I like the first bit. I don't like brackets in poems. That's about all.
You ended that poem in a preposition. What a literary faux-pas!
(Everyone's a critic, huh?)
Fixed. :P
full marks!
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